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Re: [Adonthell-general] PLAYING file
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Re: [Adonthell-general] PLAYING file |
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Thu, 24 Jan 2002 19:43:52 +0000 |
Kai Sterker wrote:
>
> On Wednesday 23 January 2002 18:14, you wrote:
> > I thought it might be a good idea to have some basic instructions on how
> > to play
> > the game so I made a little text file with this info. If you like it we
> > can use it. I guess the sensible place to have this is in the data
> > package (although a copy on the website might be a good idea too). The
> > READMEs in the code package should refer to it too if we use it
> > methinks.
>
> Yes, I do like it :).
>
> But (there is always a 'but') I think the "Aim of the game" thing reveals too
> much of the plot, espacially the bad surprise at the gates of the inn.
>
> How about replacing the first part with the following:
>
> As a loyal servant of the elven Lady Silverhair, you arrive at the remote
> trading post of Waste's Edge, where she is engaged in negotiations with the
> dwarish merchant Bjarn Fingolson. But not all is well at Waste's Edge, and
> soon you are confronted with circumstances that are about to destroy your
> mistress' high reputation. And only you can avert this.
>
yep, totally agree! Use that :)
-James
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