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Re: [PATCH] Typos in documentation
From: |
Ludovic Courtès |
Subject: |
Re: [PATCH] Typos in documentation |
Date: |
Wed, 12 Dec 2012 22:23:31 +0100 |
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Gnus/5.130005 (Ma Gnus v0.5) Emacs/24.2 (gnu/linux) |
Thanks for catching these!
I applied most of the changes. See below (nitpicking ahead!).
Andreas Enge <address@hidden> skribis:
> --- guix.alt/doc/guix.texi 2012-12-11 21:53:49.000000000 +0100
> +++ guix/doc/guix.texi 2012-12-11 22:20:49.000000000 +0100
> @@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
> @cindex package store
> The result of package build functions is @dfn{cached} in the file
> system, in a special directory called the @dfn{package store}. In
> -practice, each package is installed in a directory of its own, in the
> +practice, each package is installed in a subdirectory of its own in the
A sub-directory is also a directory. Saying that it’s under /nix/store
should make the “sub” part clear, IMO.
> -scripts, etc. This direct correspondence allows users to make sure a
> +scripts, etc.. This direct correspondence allows users to make sure a
I think the two periods would look odd, typographically.
> -Primarily, @var{options} specify the operations to be performed during
> +Primarily, @var{options} specifies the operations to be performed during
A trick meant to be equivalent to “the options listed in @var{options}”.
Thanks!
Ludo’.