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Edward Sanford Sutton, III
Sun, 15 Feb 2004 12:10:41 -0700
On the line 'or to use the --output', I think director was meant to be
The description for '-P process, --process=COMMAND' says the command is
'lilypon-bin' instead of 'lilypond-bin'.
'CONTENTS is copied into the source enclosed in a verbatim block, followed
by any text given with the intertext option, then the actual music is
displayed.' should be 'CONTENTS is copied into the source, enclosed in a
verbatim block; followed by any text given with the intertext option; then
the actual music is displayed.' (an extra comma before enclosed, and the use
of semicolons to separate the list since one item contains commas in itself).
On 'overrides lilypond-book auto detection of what type of code is in the
LilyPond block, voice contents or complete code.', if 'LilyPond block, voice
contents or complete code.' is a list of three things, then it is OK. If it
is a list of two things within LilyPond block, perhaps the comma should be
revised with a colon if I remember right.
'For single-line fragments the default is to use no indentation.' should
have a comma after fragments, or move the part of the sentence before that
point to the end of the sentence. Which writing style does lilypond's manual
At the bottom, 'specified relative central C' might make more sense as
'specified relative to central C' if I understand the meaning correctly.
If proofreading help is appreciated, what is desired? Typos, grammar,
pagelink testing, etc.. If so, what is preferred: corrections, suggestions,
Is it preferred that corrections just be sent here as I have been
would Diff/Patch type submissions be preferred. If so, should the be based on
a resynched CVS tree after I spot something?
- doc bugs,
Edward Sanford Sutton, III <=