[Emacs-diffs] /srv/bzr/emacs/trunk r107759: * doc/lispref/os.texi (Notifications): Copyedits.

[Chong Yidong]

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revno: 107759
committer: Chong Yidong <address@hidden>
branch nick: trunk
timestamp: Wed 2012-04-04 16:11:01 +0800
message:
  * doc/lispref/os.texi (Notifications): Copyedits.
modified:
  doc/lispref/ChangeLog
  doc/lispref/os.texi

=== modified file 'doc/lispref/ChangeLog'
--- a/doc/lispref/ChangeLog     2012-04-04 07:54:02 +0000
+++ b/doc/lispref/ChangeLog     2012-04-04 08:11:01 +0000
@@ -2,6 +2,8 @@
 
        * display.texi (Delayed Warnings): New node.
 
+       * os.texi (Notifications): Copyedits.
+
 2012-04-04  Glenn Morris  <address@hidden>
 
        * os.texi (Notifications): Copyedits.

=== modified file 'doc/lispref/os.texi'
--- a/doc/lispref/os.texi       2012-04-04 07:38:30 +0000
+++ b/doc/lispref/os.texi       2012-04-04 08:11:01 +0000
@@ -2255,13 +2255,15 @@
 @cindex desktop notifications
 
 Emacs is able to send @dfn{notifications} on systems that support the
-desktop notification specification of freedesktop.org.  In order to
-use this functionality, Emacs must have been compiled with D-Bus
-support, and the @code{notifications} library must be loaded.
+freedesktop.org Desktop Notifications Specification.  In order to use
+this functionality, Emacs must have been compiled with D-Bus support,
+and the @code{notifications} library must be loaded.
 
 @defun notifications-notify &rest params
-This function sends a notification to the desktop via D-Bus.
-Various @var{params} can be set, none of them is mandatory:
+This function sends a notification to the desktop via D-Bus,
+consisting of the parameters specified by the @var{params} arguments.
+These arguments should consist of alternating keyword and value pairs.
+The supported keywords and values are as follows:
 
 @table @code
 @item :title @var{title}