[Emacs-diffs] /srv/bzr/emacs/emacs-24 r107956: Small edits for lispref/intro.texi

[Glenn Morris]

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revno: 107956
committer: Glenn Morris <address@hidden>
branch nick: emacs-24
timestamp: Fri 2012-05-04 00:14:51 -0700
message:
  Small edits for lispref/intro.texi
  
  * intro.texi (Caveats): Copyedit.
  (Lisp History): Convert inforef to xref.
  (Lisp History, Printing Notation, Version Info): Improve page-breaks.
modified:
  doc/lispref/ChangeLog
  doc/lispref/intro.texi

=== modified file 'doc/lispref/ChangeLog'
--- a/doc/lispref/ChangeLog     2012-05-04 07:04:40 +0000
+++ b/doc/lispref/ChangeLog     2012-05-04 07:14:51 +0000
@@ -1,5 +1,9 @@
 2012-05-04  Glenn Morris  <address@hidden>
 
+       * intro.texi (Caveats): Copyedit.
+       (Lisp History): Convert inforef to xref.
+       (Lisp History, Printing Notation, Version Info): Improve page-breaks.
+
        * elisp.texi (DATE): Forgot to change the month in 2012-04-21 change.
 
 2012-05-01  Glenn Morris  <address@hidden>

=== modified file 'doc/lispref/intro.texi'
--- a/doc/lispref/intro.texi    2012-05-01 07:38:15 +0000
+++ b/doc/lispref/intro.texi    2012-05-04 07:14:51 +0000
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
 effort to write it up and send it in.  Please reference any comments to
 the chapter name, section name, and function name, as appropriate, since
 page numbers and chapter and section numbers will change and we may have
-trouble finding the text you are talking about.  Also state the number
+trouble finding the text you are talking about.  Also state the version
 of the edition you are criticizing.
 @end iftex
 @ifnottex
@@ -121,10 +121,10 @@
 
 @pindex cl
   A certain amount of Common Lisp emulation is available via the
address@hidden library.  @inforef{Top, Overview, cl}.
address@hidden library.  @xref{Top,, Overview, cl, Common Lisp Extensions}.
 
   Emacs Lisp is not at all influenced by Scheme; but the GNU project has
-an implementation of Scheme, called Guile.  We use Guile in all new GNU
+an implementation of Scheme, called Guile.  We use it in all new GNU
 software that calls for extensibility.
 
 @node Conventions
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@
 
   Examples in this manual indicate printed text with @address@hidden,
 irrespective of where that text goes.  The value returned by
-evaluating the form (here @code{bar}) follows on a separate line with
+evaluating the form follows on a separate line with
 @address@hidden
 
 @example
@@ -511,8 +511,6 @@
 unreleased test version.
 @end defvar
 
-  The following two variables have existed since Emacs version 19.23:
-
 @defvar emacs-major-version
 The major version number of Emacs, as an integer.  For Emacs version
 23.1, the value is 23.