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Manual: Wordsmithing Changes to First Four Chapters
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Jeffrey Oldham |
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Manual: Wordsmithing Changes to First Four Chapters |
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Wed, 23 Jan 2002 21:18:51 -0800 |
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2002-Jan-23 Jeffrey D. Oldham <address@hidden>
These changes move the manual toward delivery. Unfinished
sections remain in the DocBook source code but are not printed.
The first two chapters were indexed. Wordsmithing throughout the
document (hopefully) improved the exposition.
* arrays.xml: Wordsmithing. Finish describing the Domain use
section.
* concepts.xml: Wordsmithing.
* data-parallel.xml: Rewrite "naive".
* glossary.xml: Add some indexing.
(stride): Fix definition.
(template): New definition.
* introduction.xml: Index. Wordsmith.
* manual.xml: Add 'unfinished', 'temporary', and 'naive', and
'naivecap' entities. Change names of entities that used capital
letters. Write short description of container views. Comment out
unfinished sections.
* template.xml: Index. s/<</&openopen;/g. Wordsmith.
* tutorial.xml: Wordsmith.
Applied to mainline.
Approved by Bill Clinton.
Thanks,
Jeffrey D. Oldham
address@hidden
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