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Re: Talk for the GHM
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Andreas Enge |
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Re: Talk for the GHM |
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Thu, 18 Jul 2013 20:50:19 +0200 |
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Sounds good to me, with the first paragraph maybe a bit heavy on buzzwords.
Am Mittwoch, 17. Juli 2013 schrieb Ludovic Courtès:
> This talk will reflect on a year of development, showing how far we’ve
> got toward this mission,
"come" instead of "got", I think; I would also continue with infinitives:
"show" instead of "showing".
> and showing off with a demo.
"give" instead of "show off with", or "finish with"?
Andreas