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Re: [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm article.rst


From: Tuomas Lukka
Subject: Re: [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm article.rst
Date: Tue, 21 Jan 2003 13:46:38 +0200
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On Tue, Jan 21, 2003 at 06:19:49AM -0500, Hermanni Hyytiälä wrote:
> Log message:
>       Clean up
...
>  
> -Where in Gzz, we don't know the location, we know only the *identify*, like 
> this
> +Where in Gzz, we don't know the location, we know only the *identity*, like 
> following:

;)

1) "where" is strange

2) we don't know the location - ? of what?

3) identify -> identity

4) "like this" is actually better than "like following" (which doesn't parse 
right), 
   maybe "as follows"?

        Tuomas




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