[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm article.rst

[Toni Alatalo]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Toni Alatalo <address@hidden>   03/02/13 08:21:38

Modified files:
        storm          : article.rst 

Log message:
        fixed a couple of typos

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.139&tr2=1.140&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/storm/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.139 manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.140
--- manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.139 Thu Feb 13 08:15:18 2003
+++ manuscripts/storm/article.rst       Thu Feb 13 08:21:37 2003
@@ -266,11 +266,11 @@
 to branch and merge overlapping repositories without any central control
 [is there a specific ref for this?].
 
-Lotus Notes [ref], popular database sharing and colloboration tool, has some 
+Lotus Notes [ref], popular database sharing and collaboration tool, has some 
 similarities to Storm. In both systems, for instance, data is identified by 
 using GUIDs. However, partly because of the long age of the system, Lotus 
Notes 
-is limited to client-server architecture, where as Storm exploits adaptive 
peer-to-peer 
-architecture. Groove [ref] is a improved design of Lotus Notes, which employs 
+is limited to client-server architecture, whereas Storm exploits adaptive 
peer-to-peer 
+architecture. Groove [ref] is an improved design of Lotus Notes, which employs 
 strong security mechanisms and uses peer-to-peer functionality 
 as basis of communication channel among limited amount of participants. 
 Neither of these systems supports the immutability of data.