[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/presentations/nortti03 index.rst na...

[Asko Soukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Asko Soukka <address@hidden>    03/05/26 20:13:14

Modified files:
        presentations/nortti03: index.rst navidoc-esitys.rst 
                                paperbot.rst 

Log message:
        twid

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/index.rst.diff?tr1=1.3&tr2=1.4&r1=text&r2=text
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/navidoc-esitys.rst.diff?tr1=1.4&tr2=1.5&r1=text&r2=text
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/paperbot.rst.diff?tr1=1.2&tr2=1.3&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/index.rst
diff -u manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/index.rst:1.3 
manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/index.rst:1.4
--- manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/index.rst:1.3    Mon May 26 19:43:58 2003
+++ manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/index.rst        Mon May 26 20:13:14 2003
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 Fenfire goes Nörttiseminaari '03
 ================================
 
-.. $Id: index.rst,v 1.3 2003/05/26 23:43:58 humppake Exp $
+.. $Id: index.rst,v 1.4 2003/05/27 00:13:14 humppake Exp $
 
 *Janne V. Kujala, Asko Soukka, Tuukka Hastrup and Matti Katila*
 
@@ -39,15 +39,16 @@
         link
                navidoc-esitys.html
    ---
-   horizontally(20, hor_c, paperbot, controller, navidoc);
-   vertically(60, ver_d, index, controller);
-   vertically(60, ver_c, paperbot, texture);
-   vertically(60, ver_c, navidoc, naviesitys);
+   horizontally(50, hor_c, paperbot, controller, navidoc);
+   vertically(20, ver_d, index, controller);
+   vertically(20, ver_c, paperbot, texture);
+   vertically(20, ver_c, navidoc, naviesitys);
 
-Some recommended links:
+Some recommended links
+======================
 
- - Paperbot_; unique background texture generator
- - Papertest_; contribute to enhance avarage texture quality
+- Paperbot_; unique background texture generator
+- Papertest_; contribute to enhance avarage texture quality
 
 .. _Paperbot: http://himalia.it.jyu.fi/paperbot/paper
 .. _Papertest: http://himalia.it.jyu.fi/paperbot/similarity
Index: manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/navidoc-esitys.rst
diff -u manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/navidoc-esitys.rst:1.4 
manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/navidoc-esitys.rst:1.5
--- manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/navidoc-esitys.rst:1.4   Mon May 26 
20:04:44 2003
+++ manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/navidoc-esitys.rst       Mon May 26 
20:13:14 2003
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 Navidoc - linkitystä UML-kaavioilla
 ===================================
 
-.. $Id: navidoc-esitys.rst,v 1.4 2003/05/27 00:04:44 humppake Exp $
+.. $Id: navidoc-esitys.rst,v 1.5 2003/05/27 00:13:14 humppake Exp $
 
 *Asko Soukka ja Tuukka Hastrup*
 
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
 
 * tekstipohjainen UML-kuvaus on nopea kirjoittaa keskustelun myötä tai
   arkkitehtuurikuvauksen ohessa
-* UML-kaavio voidaan luoda samall työkalulla kuin muukin dokumentaatio
+* UML-kaavio voidaan luoda samalla työkalulla kuin muukin dokumentaatio
   tai ohjelmakoodi
 
 + kaavion elinikä voi olla pidempi kuin toteutuksen:
Index: manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/paperbot.rst
diff -u manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/paperbot.rst:1.2 
manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/paperbot.rst:1.3
--- manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/paperbot.rst:1.2 Mon May 26 19:29:25 2003
+++ manuscripts/presentations/nortti03/paperbot.rst     Mon May 26 20:13:14 2003
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 Paperbot - unique textures for background use
 =============================================
 
-.. $Id: paperbot.rst,v 1.2 2003/05/26 23:29:25 humppake Exp $
+.. $Id: paperbot.rst,v 1.3 2003/05/27 00:13:14 humppake Exp $
 
 *Tuukka Hastrup and Asko Soukka*
 
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@
 background use is generated.
 
 **Please, participate!** Do some textures look more ugly than others? 
-We do admit that there exist still a lot of variation in texture
-quality. But now you may help that. Please, take `our test`__ and we do 
-our best to optimize textures more satisfying.
+We admit that there exist still a lot of variation in texture quality,
+but now you may help it to change. Please, take `our test`__ and we 
+do our best to optimize textures to be more satisfying.
 
 .. _textures: paper.html
 .. _Paperbot: http://himalia.it.jyu.fi/paperbot/paper