[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm short-paper.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/05/30 07:51:03

Modified files:
        storm          : short-paper.rst 

Log message:
        Fix hash ref

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst.diff?tr1=1.18&tr2=1.19&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst
diff -u manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.18 
manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.19
--- manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.18      Fri May 30 07:45:56 2003
+++ manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst   Fri May 30 07:51:03 2003
@@ -2,6 +2,9 @@
 Storm: Using P2P to make the desktop part of the Web
 ====================================================
 
+.. TODO
+
+
 .. raw:: latex
 
     \begin{abstract}
@@ -54,11 +57,12 @@
    which would make them part of the web:
 
 While many Web pages are densely interlinked today,
-desktop documents still have rarely any hypermedia
-functionality. Even though documents written with
+desktop documents still have any hypermedia
+functionality only rarely. 
+Even though documents written with
 Microsoft Word or OpenOffice.org can nowadays be
 linked just like HTML files, users almost never
-do so. 
+seem to do so. 
 
 Hypermedia on the desktop would be useful for
 keeping hyperlinked notes, for referring to
@@ -95,9 +99,10 @@
 
 Location-independent identifiers are not a new idea.
 In Freenet [freenet-ieee]_, an anonymous peer-to-peer
-publication system, *cryptographic hashes* [bakhtiari95cryptographic]_
+publication system, *cryptographic hashes* 
+(see, e.g., [schneier96appliedcryptography]_)
 are used to identify versions of documents. Hashes
-are short, e.g. 20 bytes, yet it is practically impossible
+are short (often 20 bytes), yet it is practically impossible
 that two different documents will ever have the same hash,
 making them ideal identifiers on the Web.