[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

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Module name:    manuscripts
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Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/06 10:15:29

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        pointers       : article.rst 

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--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.164      Thu Nov  6 10:10:22 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Thu Nov  6 10:15:29 2003
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 Pointer records can be shared and sought for
 through the network as ordinary files.
 We also present the Storm data model, 
-an API for P2P networks and other kinds of storage
-implementing hash-based addressing. Using pointer records and the Storm
+a simple API for hash-based storage, such as P2P networks.
+Using pointer records layered on the Storm
 data model, several P2P networks can be used interoperably
-as a P2P Web (except, naturally, for dynamically generated pages), 
-and all versions of a web page
+as a P2P Web (except, naturally, for dynamically generated pages).
+All versions of a web page
 will have the same URI while residing on any host on any network.
 Past versions of a web page 
 remain accessible as long as anybody keeps a copy.