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[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst


From: Tuomas J. Lukka
Subject: [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst
Date: Mon, 10 Nov 2003 14:32:16 -0500

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/11/10 14:32:16

Modified files:
        pointers       : article.rst 

Log message:
        Reviewing with Benja

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.231&tr2=1.232&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/pointers/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.231 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.232
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.231      Mon Nov 10 14:24:48 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Mon Nov 10 14:32:15 2003
@@ -288,9 +288,9 @@
 In edition-based updating, a version's URI is the document's id
 concatenated with a version number. Version ``n`` then links to 
 version ``n+1`` using an ``<img>`` link. The image will not show until
-version ``n+1`` is actually inserted into the system; thus,
+version ``n+1`` is inserted into the system; thus,
 when the image does show up, the user knows that they should click
-on it to get to a newer version of the document.
+on it to get a newer version of the document.
 In Freenet, files only stay online as long as they are
 requested regularly; keeping a copy on your harddisk
 does not keep a page alive.
@@ -309,17 +309,17 @@
 update message that is
 signed with the appropriate key and contains a timestamp
 newer than that of the current version.
-In CFS, version and other information is stored only
+In CFS, information is stored only
 as long as the publisher regularly requests it to be kept;
 information about past versions is not stored at all.
 
-In *OceanStore* [kubiatowicz00oceanstore]_, 
+*OceanStore* [kubiatowicz00oceanstore]_, 
 an Internet-scale distributed data store that,
 based
 on the Tapestry [zhao01tapestry]_ overlay,
 allows users to access their files 
-from different locations, 
-every document has a 
+from different locations. 
+Every document has a 
 *primary replica*, a small set of servers that
 maintain the current version of the document.
 To make the connection between a document and a version,




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