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Re: Doc main page: too many parentheses
From: |
Patrick McCarty |
Subject: |
Re: Doc main page: too many parentheses |
Date: |
Sat, 25 Oct 2008 14:44:30 -0700 |
Hi Francisco,
On Sat, Oct 25, 2008 at 2:06 PM, Francisco Vila <address@hidden> wrote:
> It's me, or aren't there too many adjacent parenthesized phrases in
> the Doc main page? I suggest to remove them in the second one in every
> section, something like changing
>
> # Learning Manual (in one big page ~ 1.5 MB, in PDF)
> (start here)
>
> to
>
> # Learning Manual (in one big page ~ 1.5 MB, in PDF)
> Start here. <!-- This could be in a smaller typeface -->
I think the parentheses are okay, but I think the information can be
shuffled a little bit. Something like
Learning Manual (start here)
- in one big page (~ 1.5MB) and PDF
would be better, IMO.
Patrick