Re: Engraving essay questions and RFC

[Andrew Hawryluk]

On Fri, Oct 9, 2009 at 3:18 AM, Trevor Daniels <address@hidden> wrote:
> Hi Andrew
>
> Generally looking good.  A few comments, mostly minor:
>
> a) Page 2 has the phrase "Not let down, we created a font of musical
> symbols"
> "Not to be deterred," or "Undiscouraged," would be better.
>
> b) Where you compare the shapes of the quarter rests on page 2 it might be
> better to draw attention to the three sharp points in the middle, as the one
> at the bottom seems to exhibit the point :) being made the least.
>
> c) Page 3:  the last para of the text immediately below the first music
> example has the references to the two examples the wrong way round - the
> _lower_ measures contain the correction.
>
> d) Page 5, where you compare Lily 1.4 output, I suggest you make it clear
> when 1.4 is first mentioned that this is a very old version. This would not
> be immediately obvious to someone coming to LilyPond for the first time.
>
> Trevor

Thanks for the detailed proofreading! The changes will appear in my next patch.

Andrew