[Savannah-hackers] Re: submission of Cleo Network Supervision - savannah.gnu.org

[Mathieu Roy]

Hi,

I'm evaluating the project you submitted for approval in Savannah.

Registration MUST be in English, even if I'm personally able to
understand French without troubles.

address@hidden said:

> Un projet a été soumis à savannah.gnu.org
> Ce courriel a été envoyé à address@hidden, address@hidden
> 
> Vincent Freret <address@hidden> a décrit le projet comme suit :
> Licence: gpl
> Autre Licence: 
> Paquet: Cleo Network Supervision
> Nom système: cleo-network
> Type: GNU
> 
> Description:
> Cleo Network Supervision est un outils de supervision développé en PHP et 
> architecturé autour d\\\'une base de sonnées MySQL.
> 
> Cet outil permet de superviser des serveurs via SNMP et autres tests.
> 
> Cleo Network Supervision collecte les intérrogations des serveurs supervisés, 
> les archive dans une base de données. Cleo est capable de retranscrire 
> l\\\'état des serveurs en temps réel et permet de faire du reporting sur 
> l\\\'état des serveurs et la disponibilités des applications.
> 
> Cleo Network supervision est installable sur les plate-formes Linux et 
> Windows 

"Linux" is just a kernel of a more complex system
that we like to refer to as GNU/Linux, to emphasize
the ideals of the Free Software movement.


Would you mind changing references to Linux as an OS
to GNU/Linux?

For more information, see
http://www.gnu.org/gnu/linux-and-gnu.html


> et nécéssite l\\\'installation de : Apache, MySQL, PHP, wget.
> 
> URL du dernier package Cleo Network supervision :
> 
> http://www.cleo-network.org/download/cleo.tar.gz

The tarball is ok.


Please register your project once more with the changes
mentioned above.  

We cannot track projects that have been answered but not approved, so
we must ask you to register the project whenever you change the
registration. Make sure to apply all changes so you need to reregister
only once.

The re-registration URL found in our acknowledgement of your earlier
registration will direct you to the proper location.

Regards,


-- 
Mathieu Roy
 
  Homepage:
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