[Wesnoth-cvs-commits] wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion Weldyn_...

[Joseph Simmons]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/wesnoth
Module name:    wesnoth
Branch:         
Changes by:     Joseph Simmons <address@hidden> 05/03/01 23:28:38

Modified files:
        data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion: Weldyn_Attack.cfg 

Log message:
        Dialogue changes thanks to Simons Mith

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/wesnoth/wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/Weldyn_Attack.cfg.diff?tr1=1.26&tr2=1.27&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/Weldyn_Attack.cfg
diff -u wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/Weldyn_Attack.cfg:1.26 
wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/Weldyn_Attack.cfg:1.27
--- wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/Weldyn_Attack.cfg:1.26      Mon Feb 
21 08:08:24 2005
+++ wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/Weldyn_Attack.cfg   Tue Mar  1 
23:28:38 2005
@@ -201,18 +201,18 @@
        
                [message]
                description=Gweddry
-               message= _ "We will fight soon, my lord. Look, night approaches 
- they will soon attack. I hope we can hold them off."
+               message= _ "We will fight soon, my lord. Look, night 
approaches; they will soon attack. I hope we can hold them off."
                [/message]
                [message]
                description=Konrad
-               message= _ "Very well. But is this... Mal-Ravanal, that you 
spoke of, is he here?"
+               message= _ "Very well. But this... Mal-Ravanal, that you spoke 
of, is he here?"
                [/message]
                [message]
-               description=Gweddry
-               message= _ "I do not think so, but he might be here, hiding."
+               description=Dacyn
+               message= _ "I do not sense his magic, but he might be 
concealing his presence."
                [/message]
                [message]
-               description=Dacyn
+               description=Owaec
                message= _ "In any case, the undead are attacking now. Let us 
hope we can last out the night."
                [/message]
        [/event]
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@
                [/filter]
                [message]
                description=Gweddry
-               message= _ "Look, the undead are tearing down our defences!"
+               message= _ "The undead are tearing down our defences!"
                [/message]
        [/event]
 
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@
                [/filter]
                [message]
                description=Konrad
-               message= _ "I have died, and with me the city shall fall."
+               message= _ "I have died, and with me gone the city shall fall."
                [/message]
                [endlevel]
                result=defeat
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@
        name=time over
                [message]
                description=Dacyn
-               message= _ "Look, the sun has risen. The undead are retreating."
+               message= _ "Look, the sun has risen, and the undead are 
retreating."
                [/message]
                [endlevel]
                [/endlevel]
@@ -283,19 +283,19 @@
                [/message]
                [message]
                description=Dacyn
-               message= _ "Very well, you may read it. (It might tell us 
something useful)."
+               message= _ "Very well, you may read it. It might tell us 
something useful."
                [/message]
                [message]
                description=Messenger of Doom
-               message= _ "He says: 'Well, you have defeated some of my 
captains. Good job. But that was only a small fraction of my horde. It would be 
very easy for me to defeat you. But I don't think it would do justice to my 
power. I mean my own power, not the power of my legions. And that brings me to 
my second point. You, Gweddry, as a commander, are a coward. You claim to have 
defeated my lord's captains, but it was really your hordes, not you.'"
+               message= _ "He says: 'Well done; you have defeated some of my 
less powerful captains, and a small fraction of my horde. Were I to bring the 
whole might of my Dread Legions to bear I could crush you like an insect. But I 
seek a victory that will reveal the true extent of my personal power. Unlike 
the Great General Gweddry I do not seek to hide behind the armored skirts of my 
soldiers! You, O commander Gweddry, are a coward! The bards may sing that you 
defeated by captains, but in reality you did nothing but cower far behind the 
lines in safety while others braver than you fought and died in your name.'"
                [/message]
                [message]
                description=Gweddry
-               message= _ "What is the point of this message? All you do is 
insult us!"
+               message= _ "What is the point of this message? Doesa it consist 
of anything more than insults?"
                [/message]
                [message]
                description=Messenger of Doom
-               message= _ "The point is that Gweddry could not have defeated 
my lord's minions without the help of his slaves! I doubt Gweddry could even 
last two seconds in actual combat. And my lord will prove it. He challenges 
you, Gweddry, to a contest, a battle."
+               message= _ "The point is that you did not defeat my Lord's 
minions, it was others doing the work for you! The mighty Gweddry himself would 
last but a few moments in actual combat. And my master seeks to prove this. He 
challenges you, Gweddry, to a contest, a battle."
                [/message]
                [message]
                description=Gweddry
@@ -303,25 +303,25 @@
                [/message]
                [message]
                description=Messenger of Doom
-               message= _ "That only proves you are a coward. Anyway, these 
are his terms: 'You pick your six best warriors and I will pick my six best. 
Then we will fight, to the death, until either you or he is destroyed!'"
+               message= _ "That only proves you are a coward. Nevertheless, 
these are his terms: You pick your six best warriors and he will pick my six 
best. Then you will fight, to the death; until either you or he is destroyed!"
                [/message]
                [message]
                description=Owaec
-               message= _ "Gweddry, I don't think you should accept. He will 
bring more than seven undead to the battle; he will bring a whole army!"
+               message= _ "Gweddry, I don't think you should accept. He is 
bound to bring more than six Undead to the battle; he will bring an army!"
                [/message]
                [message]
                description=Dacyn
-               message= _ "Well, I think you should accept. This at least 
guarantees a somewhat fair fight, and otherwise we will have to face the whole 
undead army."
+               message= _ "Well, I think you should accept. There is a small 
chance that it will be a fair fight, and otherwise we will definitely have to 
face his whole undead army."
                [/message]
                [message]
                description=Messenger of Doom
-               message= _ "I will simplify your choice. Accept, or face the 
onslaught of my lord's hordes, like the coward that you are."
+               message= _ "I will simplify your choice. Accept, coward or face 
the onslaught of my lord's hordes at dawn tomorrow!"
                [/message]
                [message]
                description=Gweddry
                message= _ "Hmm..."
                        [option]
-                       name="I'll accept this duel, and prove I am not a 
coward once and for all."
+                       name="I will accept this challenge. By your own 
master's terms, that proves I am no coward."
                                [command]
                                        [endlevel]
                                        result=victory
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@
                                [/command]
                        [/option]
                        [option]
-                       name="I'm not accepting a duel which you would 
obviously cheat in. I refuse!"
+                       name="I will not accept a fight in which he will 
obviously cheat! I refuse!"
                                [command]
                                        [endlevel]
                                        result=victory