www/kids free-software-in-your-school.html

[Joakim Olsson]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Joakim Olsson <jocke>   07/05/15 12:38:50

Modified files:
        kids           : free-software-in-your-school.html 

Log message:
        Changed a little in the letter.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/kids/free-software-in-your-school.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.3&r2=1.4

Patches:
Index: free-software-in-your-school.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/kids/free-software-in-your-school.html,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -b -r1.3 -r1.4
--- free-software-in-your-school.html   11 May 2007 17:15:47 -0000      1.3
+++ free-software-in-your-school.html   15 May 2007 12:38:33 -0000      1.4
@@ -35,18 +35,17 @@
 fee. In particular, this means that source code must be available.
 
 Our school can save money with free software which we are free to copy and 
-redistribute the software so our school can make copies for all the computers 
we
- have.
+redistribute so that we can make copies for all the computers we have.
 
 We can learn about and study how the software works if we use free software 
with
- which you always have access to the source code.
+which you always have access to the source code.
 
 Free software is not only good in schools. It is always good. If we learn how 
to
- use it in our school, we will maybe use it a more effective way after we 
+use it in our school, we will maybe use it in a more effective way after we 
 graduate.
 
 We demand a removal of all the proprietary software in our schools computers 
and
- we demand a free software replacement.
+we demand a free software replacement.
 
 Sincerely,
 
@@ -91,7 +90,7 @@
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-$Date: 2007/05/11 17:15:47 $
+$Date: 2007/05/15 12:38:33 $
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