www/philosophy freedom-or-copyright.html

[Jeanne Rasata]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Jeanne Rasata <jrasata> 10/07/07 15:12:06

Modified files:
        philosophy     : freedom-or-copyright.html 

Log message:
        correct a couple of typos and made a couple of minor edits to the head 
note

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/philosophy/freedom-or-copyright.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.41&r2=1.42

Patches:
Index: freedom-or-copyright.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/philosophy/freedom-or-copyright.html,v
retrieving revision 1.41
retrieving revision 1.42
diff -u -b -r1.41 -r1.42
--- freedom-or-copyright.html   29 Jun 2010 02:20:33 -0000      1.41
+++ freedom-or-copyright.html   7 Jul 2010 15:12:03 -0000       1.42
@@ -7,13 +7,13 @@
   by <strong>Richard M. Stallman</strong>
 </p>
 
-<p><em>Many points that lead to a conclusion that software freedom
+<p><em>Many points that lead to the conclusion that software freedom
 must be universal often apply to other forms of expressive works,
-albeit in different ways. This essay address how the principles of
-software freedom are relevant to written works meant for humans to
-read.  Although this is not about software. we include it here since
-we think many readers will wonder how the same principles can be
-applied to areas other than software.</em></p>
+albeit in different ways. This essay addresses how the principles of
+software freedom apply to written works meant for humans to read.
+Although this is not about software, we include it here since we think
+many readers will wonder how the same principles can be applied to
+areas other than software.</em></p>
 
 <p>
 Copyright was established in the age of the printing press as an
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
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-$Date: 2010/06/29 02:20:33 $
+$Date: 2010/07/07 15:12:03 $
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