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From: | Oliver Corff |
Subject: | Re: [bug #57667] refer(1) rehab |
Date: | Sat, 12 Aug 2023 09:32:46 +0200 |
User-agent: | Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:102.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/102.10.0 |
Dear All,
Branden, thank you for alerting me --- without the message to the mailing list the Savannah would have escaped my attention (I am still not *really* familiar with it).
The rephrased beginning to the refer man page communicates the key concept in a much more straightforward way than the old version --- thank you!
Citing the first topic-specific sentence of the old (1.22.4)
refer manpage,
refer copies the contents of filename... to the standard output
this is *not* the primary purpose why one would use refer, though
technically true.
cat(1) also copies the contents to the standard output;-), but in
contrast to refer, this *is* its primary purpose.
That minor issue being solved makes reading the rest much easier.
Thank you, best regards,
Oliver.
PS: Just a comment from the linguist's point of view: What is grammatically correct, is not necessary logically correct.
The old version of the introduction reads a bit like the following made-up examples:
steering_wheel(1)
steering_wheel keeps the direction of the vehicle straight. Non-zero degree angular turns of steering_wheel translate into directional changes of the motion vector the amount of which depends on additional factors.
vs.
steering_wheel is used to control the direction of the moving vehicle. Any angular turn translates into a directional change of the moving vehicle.
Or:
car(1)
1. It is forbidden to drive cars.
2. Under exceptions speciified by laws and relevant regulations, individuals may obtain exceptional, non-transferrable and limited permission to drive cars, called "driver's licence", granted in a strict case-by-case process upon meeting all requirements specified by aforementioned laws and regulations. The permission may be revoked at any time on legal grounds.
3. Main controls of car(1) are: steering_wheel(1),
accelerator(1), brake(1), gearshift(1), etc.
Update of bug #57667 (project groff): Status: None => Need Info _______________________________________________________ Follow-up Comment #6: Oliver, can you respond to Dave's comment #5? Is the _refer_(1) man page rehabilitated to a point of utility for you? I'll add that I'm glad Piotr Piatrou found _groff_mm_(7) adequate as it existed four years ago; I found that I myself did not, so I whacked on it pretty good for groff 1.23.0. $ COLUMNS=72 git di --stat 1.22.4 1.23.0 contrib/mm/groff_mm.7.man contrib/mm/groff_mm.7.man | 6049 +++++++++++++++++++++++-------------- 1 file changed, 3741 insertions(+), 2308 deletions(-) _______________________________________________________ Reply to this item at: <https://savannah.gnu.org/bugs/?57667> _______________________________________________ Message sent via Savannah https://savannah.gnu.org/
Dr. Oliver Corff Mail: oliver.corff@email.de
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