[PATCH 1/1] Grammar and formatting improvements

[Benson Muite]

Limit to 80 characters per line.

Signed-off-by: Benson Muite <benson_muite@emailplus.org>
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 README.md | 77 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------
 1 file changed, 49 insertions(+), 28 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 5645323..8b17386 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -3,41 +3,48 @@ GNU Artanis needs a logo, contribution is welcome!
 
 NOTICE
 =========
-Since Jun 4th 2018, Microsoft has aquired GitHub, then GNU Artanis will never 
try to organize community on GigHub, include issues and PR.
-Please visit https://gitlab.com/NalaGinrut/artanis
-
-According to [GNU Ethical Repository Criteria 
Evaluations](https://www.gnu.org/software/repo-criteria-evaluation.html). GNU 
Artanis as GNU official project is not proper to be maintained on GitHub.
-So I **will not** do maintenance work for GNU Artanis on github to show my 
position on free software.
-That means I **will not** response to issues or pull requests on GitHub. Until 
GitHub show some respect to freedom of users on these issues:
+Since Jun 4th 2018, Microsoft has aquired GitHub, then GNU Artanis will never
+try to organize community on GitHub, include issues and PR. Please visit 
+https://gitlab.com/NalaGinrut/artanis
+
+According to 
+[GNU Ethical Repository Criteria 
Evaluations](https://www.gnu.org/software/repo-criteria-evaluation.html).
+GNU Artanis as GNU official project is not proper to be maintained on GitHub.
+So I **will not** do maintenance work for GNU Artanis on GitHub to show my
+position on free software.
+That means I **will not** respond to issues or pull requests on GitHub, until
+GitHub show some respect to freedom of users on these issues:
 * No other nonfree software is required to use the site (thus, no Flash).
 * Does not discriminate against classes of users, or against any country.
 
-The maintenance repo will be these two:
+The maintenance repos will be these two:
 * [GNU official repo](http://git.savannah.gnu.org/cgit/artanis.git/)
 Accepts patches and issues on mailing-list artanis@gnu.org
 
 * [GitLab repo](https://gitlab.com/NalaGinrut/artanis)
 Accepts issues and pull requests.
 
-For historical reasons, GNU Artanis will maintain the site with gh-pages on 
GitHub since the pages service on GitLab is very different so I can't just move 
it simply.
-Before we have a better/modern Savannah, we have to endure this situation.
+For historical reasons, GNU Artanis will maintain the site with gh-pages on
+GitHub since the pages service on GitLab is very different so I can't just move
+it simply. Before we have a better/modern Savannah, we have to endure this
+situation.
 
 GNU Artanis
 =========
 
-GNU Artanis aims to be a web application framework for Scheme.
-The philosophy of Artanis is to be very radical, and to try
-cutting-edge things.
-So use it at your own risk...however, playing with it may result in
-some cool experiences!
+GNU Artanis aims to be a web application framework for Scheme. The philosophy 
of
+Artanis is to be very radical, and to try cutting-edge things. So use it at 
your
+own risk...however, playing with it may result in some cool experiences!
 
 ## Features:
 
 * GPLv3+ & LGPLv3+
 * Very lightweight - easy to hack and learn for newbies.
 * Support JSON/CSV/XML/SXML.
-* A complete web-server implementation, including an error page handler.
-* High concurrent async non-blocking server core based on delimited 
continuations.
+* A complete web-server implementation, including an error page
+handler.
+* High concurrent async non-blocking server core based on delimited
+continuations.
 * Has a Sinatra-like style route, hence the name "Artanis" ;-)
 * Supported databases (through guile-dbi): MySQL/SQLite/PostgreSQL.
 * Nice and easy web cache control.
@@ -69,7 +76,9 @@ http://gnu.org/software/artanis/manual
 
 The source to the manual is in the gh-pages branch.
 
-Please **do not** modify the HTML pages directly. The pages are generated by a 
certain static page generator, so please take a look at the concerned directory 
-
+Please **do not** modify the HTML pages directly. The pages are generated by a
+certain static page generator, so please take a look at the concerned 
+directory -
 
 https://gitlab.com/NalaGinrut/artanis/tree/gh-pages
 
@@ -77,7 +86,9 @@ https://gitlab.com/NalaGinrut/artanis/tree/gh-pages
 
 The source to the manual is in the gh-pages branch.
 
-Please **do not** modify the manual.texi and manual.html files directly, as 
they are generated by org-mode. The file to be edited is 'manual.org' -
+Please **do not** modify the manual.texi and manual.html files directly, as
+they are generated by org-mode. The file to be edited is
+'manual.org' -
 
 https://gitlab.com/NalaGinrut/artanis/blob/gh-pages/docs/manual.org
 
@@ -85,18 +96,28 @@ 
https://gitlab.com/NalaGinrut/artanis/blob/gh-pages/docs/manual.org
 
 Thank you very much for contributing!
 
-In my opinion, bug reports are the most significant contributions. Please 
don't hesitate to report in a proper way for me to reproduce.
+In my opinion, bug reports are the most significant contributions. Please don't
+hesitate to report them in a reproducible manner.
 
-Please read the manual carefully, and ask questions to know more about GNU 
Artanis. The preferred way to discuss internals of Artanis is to send
-mail to [artanis@gnu.org](https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/artanis) 
because it's good for archive. And you could discuss the bugs in issues for 
better tracking than mails.
+Please read the manual carefully, and ask questions to know more about GNU
+Artanis. The preferred way to discuss internals of Artanis is to send mail to
+[artanis@gnu.org](https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/artanis)
+because it's good for archive. And you could discuss the bugs in issues for
+better tracking than mails.
 
-I'll write articles about GNU Artanis occasionally on my blog: 
http://nalaginrut.com
+I'll write articles about GNU Artanis occasionally on my blog:
+http://nalaginrut.com
 
-GNU Artanis is aiming for product quality, since it's going to be used in a 
real product. So we need the contributions in good quality.
-The tiny or obvious fixes will be more likely to be applied. But bigger 
contributions will be under strict review and discussion.
+GNU Artanis is aiming for production quality, since it's going to be used in a
+real product. So we need high quality contributions.  Please send small or
+obvious fixes, as these will be easy to apply.  For larger contributions, 
please
+discuss first as these will be more strictly reviewed.
 
-Artwork and document writing is important contributions too and great 
appreciated in GNU Artanis community. So does advocating on your blogs, wikis,
-and webcasting tutorials. They're good ways to help GNU Artanis to form a 
community.
+Artwork and documentation are important contributions too and greatly
+appreciated in the GNU Artanis community. So does advocating on your blogs,
+wikis, and webcasting tutorials. They're good ways to help GNU Artanis form a
+community.
 
-If you're using GNU Artanis in your project, please share your experiences. 
GNU Artanis wants to build a friendly community to help
-people know more about free software and help functional programming to be 
used in industry.
+If you're using GNU Artanis in your project, please share your experiences. GNU
+Artanis wants to build a friendly community to help people know more about free
+software and help functional programming to be used in industry.
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