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bug#15375: 24.3.50; Elisp manual: mention what units are used for window
From: |
Drew Adams |
Subject: |
bug#15375: 24.3.50; Elisp manual: mention what units are used for window margin functions |
Date: |
Sat, 14 Sep 2013 09:26:42 -0700 (PDT) |
> I left it open to allow you to review the changes. You can do that
> either by pointing your browser at
> http://bzr.savannah.gnu.org/lh/emacs/trunk/annotate/head:/doc/lispref/displa
> y.texi and going down to line 4160, or by waiting for the next binary
> snapshot of the trunk.
Thanks, and thanks for that URL & line #.
Looks good, but I have these minor suggestions, if you have the time:
1. Move the "(a.k.a.@: ``column'')" to the first occurrence of "character
cell". I, for one, did not know the latter term, and wondered about it
until I got to that aka.
2. You can remove this part, as it is implied: "; if none of the two margins
exist, the function returns @code{(nil)}." (It does not hurt, but in that
case please change "none" to "neither", to be clearer.)
3. You should add a comma before "and" in "The argument @var{left} controls
the left margin and @var{right} controls the right margin (default @code{0})."
,
Alternatively, you can use ";" instead of ", and", or split it into two
sentences.