English cleanup of published gettext manual, chapter 16, section 1

[amores perros]

http://www.gnu.org/software/gettext/manual/gettext.html#Conclusion

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* Patrick and Jim shared some tries and experimentations in this area.

(sounds very unnatural)

> Patrick and Jim shared some experimental efforts in this area.

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* Jim wanted to know what standards were,

(grammatically incorrect)

> Jim wanted to know what standards existed,

but perhaps what was really meant was this:

> Jim wanted to know what standard practices existed,

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* for what was meant to become glocale, at that time.

(minor tweak to make read more smoothly)

> for what was meant at that time to become glocale.

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* Jim implemented glocale and got a lot of exhausting feedback from Patrick 
and Richard

That sounds like a joke, but it might just be a typo for the following:

> Jim implemented glocale and got a lot of exhaustive feedback from Patrick 
> and Richard

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* While Jim took some distance and time and became dad for a second time

(Missing article, and also "father" is more appropriate in most writing)

> While Jim took some distance and time and became a father for a second time

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* to the set of guidelines who emerged out of

(remove inappropriate anthropomorphizing :))

> to the set of guidelines which emerged out of

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* fine tuning the evolving tools

(spelling, specifically, hyphenization fix)

* fine-tuning the evolving tools

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* translator teams started to exist in May 1995

(not logically very sensible)

perhaps

> translator teams came into existence in May 1995

or

> translator teams started to form in May 1995

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* Ulrich being quite busy in his role of General Maintainer of GNU libc, he 
handed over

(This is an ablative absolute, which is exceedingly uncommon
in English; I suggest rewording to common English construction
as follows:)

* Ulrich, being quite busy in his role of General Maintainer of GNU libc, 
handed over

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