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More bugs on first page of German lilypond website
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Markus Olbrich |
Subject: |
More bugs on first page of German lilypond website |
Date: |
Wed, 29 Oct 2014 19:13:36 +0100 |
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Hi!
Today, I observed that the sentence has been corrected. Thank you very
much. I think it is important to give a good first impression on the
website.
However, I recognized that there are some more mistakes:
In the header:
Incorrect is:
"... Notensatz für Jedermann"
Correct is:
"... Notensatz für jedermann"
(Because it is not only for people who's name is "Jedermann" but for
everyone.
In the second sentence:
Incorrect is:
"mit computergesetzen Noten"
Correct is:
"mit computergesetzten Noten"
In the third sentence:
Incorrect is:
"GNU Projekts"
Correct is:
"GNU-Projekts"
Kind regards,
Markus
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Betreff: Bug on first page of German lilypond website
Datum: Sun, 20 Jul 2014 20:45:10 +0200
Von: Markus Olbrich <address@hidden>
An: address@hidden
Hi!
On the German version of the website there is a mistake in the first
sentence of the first page (http://www.lilypond.org/index.de.html):
Incorrect is:
"LilyPond ist ein Notensatzprogramm, dass es sich zum Ziel gemacht hat,
Notendruck von der bestmöglichen Qualität zu erstellen."
Correct is:
"LilyPond ist ein Notensatzprogramm, das es sich zum Ziel gemacht hat,
Notendruck von der bestmöglichen Qualität zu erstellen."
Stylistically even better would be:
"LilyPond ist ein Notensatzprogramm, das es sich zum Ziel gemacht hat,
Notendruck in bestmöglicher Qualität zu erstellen."
Kind regards,
Markus
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Dr.-Ing. Markus Olbrich
Institute of Microelectronic Systems - EDA
Leibniz Universität Hannover - http://www.ims.uni-hannover.de
Phone: +49 511 762-19661 - Fax: +49 511 762-19694
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