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Re: [Dragora-users] dragora-installer: Message improvement proposal I
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Matias Fonzo |
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Re: [Dragora-users] dragora-installer: Message improvement proposal I |
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Tue, 04 Feb 2020 21:09:47 -0300 |
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El 2020-02-04 20:50, Michael Siegel escribió:
Am 04.02.20 um 00:21 schrieb Matias Fonzo:
El 2020-02-02 10:45, Michael Siegel escribió:
Well, as I've stated earlier, I thought the version before
2019-12-29[1]
was quite viable already and just needed a few adjustments, some of
which I suggested in two messages to this mailing list on 2019-12-28
and
2019-12-29:
https://lists.nongnu.org/archive/html/dragora-users/2019-12/msg00007.html
Okay. I have made the changes as you suggested in the previous
message
^. Also trying an explanation for <Space>, <Enter>. Let me know what
you think.
That looks really good!
Good. :-)
Only two minor issues:
#1
“Use the cursor keys to move around the installer's menus.”
It needs to be “move around in the installer's menus.”
That explains why it sounded weird to me.
#2
“Remember that you can use [Ctrl]+[C] to abort the installation at any
time.”
I would omit “Remember that” at the beginning of the sentence. It's not
wrong, but it simply seems a bit weird. I could try to explain that
further, if you're interested.
http://git.savannah.nongnu.org/cgit/dragora.git/commit/?id=210d3ccc855e1b1e54d92758e656c5166ed53b36
P.S: I haven't uploaded the package for these changes yet, as I'm in
the
bootstrap process.
That's fine. Just take your time.
http://rsync.dragora.org/v3/packages/x86_64/tools/dragora-installer-20200204-x86_64+1.tlz
http://rsync.dragora.org/v3/packages/x86_64/tools/dragora-installer-20200204-x86_64+1.tlz.sha256
Are there other messages you would like to improve?.
Thanks,
Matías