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[PATCH 0/3] doc: Reorder "Channels" section |
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Fri, 18 Sep 2020 03:37:44 +0200 |
Dear,
As discussed here [1], the Channels is modified to satisfy a more logical
order, at least mine. :-)
The patch 0003 can be hard to review. Basically, I have moved the sections:
5.6 Invoking @command{guix pull}
5.7 Channels
5.7.1 Specifying Additional Channels
5.7.2 Using a Custom Guix Channel
5.7.3 Replicating Guix
5.7.4 Channel Authentication
5.7.5 Primary URL
5.7.6 Writing custom channels
5.7.7 Package Modules in a Sub-directory
5.7.8 Declaring Channel Dependencies
5.7.9 Specifying Channel Authorizations
5.7.10 Writing Channel News
5.8 Invoking @command{guix time-machine}
And I did some minor tweaks trying to have user vs developer of channels. Say
that from 5.7.1 to 5.7.5, the channel are collection of "variants". Then it
becomes "your own channel".
I added these words which deserve a better wording, I guess.
--8<---------------cut here---------------start------------->8---
Last, as a channel author, you may want to run an authenticated channel
(@pxref{Channel Authentication}), then @pxref{Specifying Channel
Authorizations} for details.
--8<---------------cut here---------------end--------------->8---
At the end of the section "Writing custom channels".
And after some thinking, I find better to have "guix pull" and time-machine
visible from Package Management section:
<https://guix.gnu.org/manual/devel/en/guix.html#Package-Management>.
Well, that is a start. :-)
[1] https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-devel/2020-09/msg00153.html
All the best,
simon
zimoun (3):
doc: Update the master menu.
doc: Add the "Channels" section menu.
doc: Reorder the "Channels" section.
doc/guix.texi | 353 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------
1 file changed, 202 insertions(+), 151 deletions(-)
base-commit: 679d5e6b3dcac4ee1f419c04b3719fead0bd9ee5
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Re: [bug#43482] [PATCH v2 1/2] doc: Update the master menu. |
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Sun, 27 Sep 2020 22:38:12 +0200 |
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Hi,
zimoun <zimon.toutoune@gmail.com> skribis:
> * doc/guix.texi: Update the master menu.
[...]
> The sectioning becomes:
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> 1. Specifying Additional Channels (was 3.)
> 2. Using a Custom Guix Channel (was 2.)
> 3. Replicating Guix (was 9.)
> 4. Channel Authentication (was 1.)
> 5. Primary URL (was 7.)
> 6. Creating a Channel (reworded)
> 7. Package Modules in a Sub-directory (was 5.)
> 8. Declaring Channel Dependencies (was 4.)
> 9. Specifying Channel Authorizations (was 6.)
> 10. Writing Channel News (was 8.)
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> * doc/guix.texi (Channels): Move section to chapter.
> Reorder the chapter.
> Minor tweaks to keep uniformity.
> Update the master menu.
Applied, thanks!
Ludo’.
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