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Re: Texinfo doc for GDB-UI

From: Richard Stallman
Subject: Re: Texinfo doc for GDB-UI
Date: Fri, 27 Dec 2002 14:10:30 -0500

    + @node Breakpoints Buffer
    + @subsubsection Breakpoints Buffer
    + This buffer

Say explicitly which buffer you mean.  The text should never refer
back to the section title in that way.

                  allows control

That's clumsy writing--can you make it smoother?

                                 of the breakpoints which have been set
    + previously

That's the useful info for the user.  It says what this feature does.

                 and uses the output from the GDB command @ref{Set Breaks,,
    + info breakpoints, gdb, The GNU debugger}.

That's implementation info; it should not be stated here at all,
because it is not relevant for the readers who will use GDB-UI.

      There are three commands
    + available :

That's not very clean.  It is better to say,

  There are three special commands in the breakpoints buffer:

Do you see why that reads better?

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