[Emacs-diffs] /srv/bzr/emacs/emacs-24 r107915: Reword some doc/emacs to remove/reduce some overly long/short lines.

[Glenn Morris]

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revno: 107915
committer: Glenn Morris <address@hidden>
branch nick: emacs-24
timestamp: Sat 2012-04-28 00:45:03 -0700
message:
  Reword some doc/emacs to remove/reduce some overly long/short lines.
  
  * xresources.texi (Resources):
  * mule.texi (Language Environments):
  * misc.texi (Amusements):
  * maintaining.texi (VC Change Log):
  * frames.texi (Fonts):
  * custom.texi (Specifying File Variables, Minibuffer Maps):
  * cmdargs.texi (Initial Options):
  * building.texi (Flymake):
  Reword to remove/reduce some overly long/short lines.
modified:
  doc/emacs/ChangeLog
  doc/emacs/building.texi
  doc/emacs/cmdargs.texi
  doc/emacs/custom.texi
  doc/emacs/frames.texi
  doc/emacs/maintaining.texi
  doc/emacs/misc.texi
  doc/emacs/mule.texi
  doc/emacs/xresources.texi

=== modified file 'doc/emacs/ChangeLog'
--- a/doc/emacs/ChangeLog       2012-04-27 00:20:02 +0000
+++ b/doc/emacs/ChangeLog       2012-04-28 07:45:03 +0000
@@ -1,3 +1,15 @@
+2012-04-28  Glenn Morris  <address@hidden>
+
+       * xresources.texi (Resources):
+       * mule.texi (Language Environments):
+       * misc.texi (Amusements):
+       * maintaining.texi (VC Change Log):
+       * frames.texi (Fonts):
+       * custom.texi (Specifying File Variables, Minibuffer Maps):
+       * cmdargs.texi (Initial Options):
+       * building.texi (Flymake):
+       Reword to remove/reduce some overly long/short lines.
+
 2012-04-27  Glenn Morris  <address@hidden>
 
        * emacs.texi: Some fixes for detailed menu.

=== modified file 'doc/emacs/building.texi'
--- a/doc/emacs/building.texi   2012-04-26 00:31:47 +0000
+++ b/doc/emacs/building.texi   2012-04-28 07:45:03 +0000
@@ -426,11 +426,11 @@
 C/C++ files this is usually the C compiler.  Flymake can also use
 build tools such as @code{make} for checking complicated projects.
 
-  To enable Flymake mode, type @kbd{M-x flymake-mode}.  You can go to
-the errors found by Flymake mode with @kbd{M-x
-flymake-goto-next-error} and @kbd{M-x flymake-goto-prev-error}.  To
-display any error messages associated with the current line, use
address@hidden flymake-display-err-menu-for-current-line}.
+  To enable Flymake mode, type @kbd{M-x flymake-mode}.  You can jump to
+the errors that it finds by using @kbd{M-x
+flymake-goto-next-error} and @kbd{M-x flymake-goto-prev-error}.
+Use the command @kbd{M-x flymake-display-err-menu-for-current-line}
+to display any error messages associated with the current line.
 
   For more details about using Flymake,
 @ifnottex

=== modified file 'doc/emacs/cmdargs.texi'
--- a/doc/emacs/cmdargs.texi    2012-04-26 00:31:47 +0000
+++ b/doc/emacs/cmdargs.texi    2012-04-28 07:45:03 +0000
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@
 @opindex -Q
 @itemx --quick
 @opindex --quick
-Start emacs with minimum customizations, similar to using @samp{-q},
+Start emacs with minimum customizations.  This is similar to using @samp{-q},
 @samp{--no-site-file}, @samp{--no-site-lisp}, and @samp{--no-splash}
 together.  This also stops Emacs from processing X resources by
 setting @code{inhibit-x-resources} to @code{t} (@pxref{Resources}).

=== modified file 'doc/emacs/custom.texi'
--- a/doc/emacs/custom.texi     2012-04-26 00:31:47 +0000
+++ b/doc/emacs/custom.texi     2012-04-28 07:45:03 +0000
@@ -1054,8 +1054,8 @@
 @findex add-file-local-variable-prop-line
 @findex delete-file-local-variable-prop-line
 @findex copy-dir-locals-to-file-locals-prop-line
-  Instead of adding variable/value pairs by hand, you can use the
-command @kbd{M-x add-file-local-variable-prop-line}.  This prompts for
+  You can use the command @kbd{M-x add-file-local-variable-prop-line}
+instead of adding entries by hand.  It prompts for
 a variable and value, and adds them to the first line in the
 appropriate way.  @kbd{M-x delete-file-local-variable-prop-line}
 prompts for a variable, and deletes its entry from the line.  @kbd{M-x
@@ -1522,7 +1522,7 @@
 @vindex minibuffer-local-completion-map
 @vindex minibuffer-local-must-match-map
 @vindex minibuffer-local-filename-completion-map
address@hidden minibuffer-local-must-match-filename-map
address@hidden minibuffer-local-filename-must-match-map
   The minibuffer has its own set of local keymaps; they contain various
 completion and exit commands.
 
@@ -1539,7 +1539,7 @@
 for cautious completion.
 @item
 @code{minibuffer-local-filename-completion-map} and
address@hidden are like the two
address@hidden are like the two
 previous ones, but they are specifically for file name completion.
 They do not bind @key{SPC}.
 @end itemize

=== modified file 'doc/emacs/frames.texi'
--- a/doc/emacs/frames.texi     2012-04-14 08:25:06 +0000
+++ b/doc/emacs/frames.texi     2012-04-28 07:45:03 +0000
@@ -666,8 +666,8 @@
 Some font names support other values.
 @item widthtype
 The font width---normally @samp{normal}, @samp{condensed},
address@hidden, or @samp{semicondensed} (some font names support
-other values).
address@hidden, or @samp{extended}.  Some font names support
+other values.
 @item style
 An optional additional style name.  Usually it is empty---most XLFDs
 have two hyphens in a row at this point.

=== modified file 'doc/emacs/maintaining.texi'
--- a/doc/emacs/maintaining.texi        2012-04-10 06:54:43 +0000
+++ b/doc/emacs/maintaining.texi        2012-04-28 07:45:03 +0000
@@ -893,7 +893,7 @@
 (@code{vc-print-root-log}).
 
 @item C-x v I
-Display the changes that will be received with a pull operation
+Display the changes that a pull operation will retrieve
 (@code{vc-log-incoming}).
 
 @item C-x v O

=== modified file 'doc/emacs/misc.texi'
--- a/doc/emacs/misc.texi       2012-04-26 00:31:47 +0000
+++ b/doc/emacs/misc.texi       2012-04-28 07:45:03 +0000
@@ -2481,8 +2481,8 @@
 
 @findex animate-birthday-present
 @cindex animate
-  The @code{animate} package makes text dance.  For an example, try
address@hidden animate-birthday-present}.
+  The @code{animate} package makes text dance (e.g. try
address@hidden animate-birthday-present}).
 
 @findex blackbox
 @findex mpuz

=== modified file 'doc/emacs/mule.texi'
--- a/doc/emacs/mule.texi       2012-04-25 08:30:59 +0000
+++ b/doc/emacs/mule.texi       2012-04-28 07:45:03 +0000
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@
 @cindex Euro sign
 @cindex UTF-8
 @quotation
-ASCII, Belarusian, Bengali, Brazilian Portuguese, Bulgarian,
+ASCII, Belarusian, Bengali, Brazilian Portuguese, Bulgarian, Cham,
 Chinese-BIG5, Chinese-CNS, Chinese-EUC-TW, Chinese-GB, Chinese-GBK,
 Chinese-GB18030, Croatian, Cyrillic-ALT, Cyrillic-ISO, Cyrillic-KOI8,
 Czech, Devanagari, Dutch, English, Esperanto, Ethiopic, French,

=== modified file 'doc/emacs/xresources.texi'
--- a/doc/emacs/xresources.texi 2012-01-19 07:21:25 +0000
+++ b/doc/emacs/xresources.texi 2012-04-28 07:45:03 +0000
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 @command{xrdb}---for instance, @samp{xrdb ~/.Xdefaults}.
 
 @cindex registry, setting resources (MS-Windows)
-  (MS-Windows systems do not support X resource files; on Windows,
+  (MS-Windows systems do not support X resource files; on such systems,
 Emacs looks for X resources in the Windows Registry, first under the
 key @samp{HKEY_CURRENT_USER\SOFTWARE\GNU\Emacs}, which affects only
 the current user and override the system-wide settings, and then under