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[Gnash-commit] gnash/doc/C netconnection.xml
From: |
Ann Barcomb |
Subject: |
[Gnash-commit] gnash/doc/C netconnection.xml |
Date: |
Fri, 20 Oct 2006 18:22:40 +0000 |
CVSROOT: /sources/gnash
Module name: gnash
Changes by: Ann Barcomb <ann> 06/10/20 18:22:40
Modified files:
doc/C : netconnection.xml
Log message:
* punctuation nits
* some rewriting for clarification
* also changed 'an URL' to 'a URL' which is subject to debate (depends
upon
the pronunciation of the word).
CVSWeb URLs:
http://cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/gnash/doc/C/netconnection.xml?cvsroot=gnash&r1=1.7&r2=1.8
Patches:
Index: netconnection.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/gnash/gnash/doc/C/netconnection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -b -r1.7 -r1.8
--- netconnection.xml 20 Oct 2006 15:12:20 -0000 1.7
+++ netconnection.xml 20 Oct 2006 18:22:40 -0000 1.8
@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@
</para>
<para>
- This class was first introduced for swf v7. and the behaviour has
+ This class was first introduced for swf v7 and the behaviour has
recently changed slightly to allow the loading of files from
- external systems. Prior to this, it was required to pass NULL to
- this class. Gnash handles both cases. The older behaviour default
- is connecting to the local filesystem for the file.
+ external systems. Prior to this, you were required to pass NULL to
+ this class. Gnash handles both cases. The older behaviour is default
+ when connecting to the local filesystem for the file.
</para>
<para>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>
Connect to a local or remote system to load a
- FLV file. Arg can be NULL, or an URL.
+ FLV file. Arg can be NULL, or a URL.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
This method is partially implemented. It can only be
used in conjunction with the <link
linkend="asnetstream">NetStream</link> and <link
- linkend="asvideo">Video</link> classes, it cannot
+ linkend="asvideo">Video</link> classes; it cannot
load a FLV file by itself.
</para>
</entry>