[lsd0003] branch master updated: Improved some form

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     new 4b67341  Improved some form
4b67341 is described below

commit 4b67341d57bf93d247faf9ff173e19cf0a867962
Author: Elias Summermatter <elias.summermatter@seccom.ch>
AuthorDate: Mon Dec 21 15:51:41 2020 +0100

    Improved some form
---
 draft-summermatter-set-union.xml | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-summermatter-set-union.xml b/draft-summermatter-set-union.xml
index edcc56a..1d96fa3 100644
--- a/draft-summermatter-set-union.xml
+++ b/draft-summermatter-set-union.xml
@@ -613,14 +613,14 @@
                     <name>Description</name>
                     <t>
                         The Element message contains a element that is synced 
in the <xref target="modeofoperation_individual-elements" format="title" />
-                        to transmit a complete element between the peers.
+                        and transmits a full element between the peers.
                     </t>
                     <t>
-                        This message is sent in the state <strong>Active 
Decoding</strong> and in the <strong>Passive Decoding</strong>
+                        This message is sent in the state <strong>Active 
Decoding</strong> and <strong>Passive Decoding</strong>
                         as answer to an <em><xref target="messages_demand" 
format="title" /></em> message from the remote peer.
                         The Element message can also be received in the 
<strong>Finish Closing</strong> or <strong>Finish Waiting</strong>
                         state after receiving a <em><xref 
target="messages_done" format="title" /></em> message from the remote peer, in 
this
-                        case the client changes to the 
<strong>Finished</strong> state as soon as all Element messages are received.
+                        case the client changes to the 
<strong>Finished</strong> state as soon as all demands for elements have been 
satisfied.
                     </t>
                 </section>
                 <section anchor="messages_elements_structure" numbered="true" 
toc="default">

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