[Gsrc-commit] trunk r3440: Cynthiune Makefile rewording

[Carl Hansen]

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revno: 3440
revision-id: address@hidden
parent: address@hidden
committer: address@hidden
branch nick: trunk
timestamp: Wed 2015-10-14 01:56:20 -0700
message:
  Cynthiune Makefile rewording
modified:
  gnustep/Cynthiune/Makefile     makefile-20151013211752-6rb4xfzxg56b53wn-3

=== modified file 'gnustep/Cynthiune/Makefile'
--- a/gnustep/Cynthiune/Makefile        2015-10-13 21:18:28 +0000
+++ b/gnustep/Cynthiune/Makefile        2015-10-14 08:56:20 +0000
@@ -18,23 +18,23 @@
 NAME = Cynthiune
 GARNAME = Cynthiune
 GARVERSION = 1.0.0
-HOME_URL = http://www.non-gnu.org/gap/cynthiune
+HOME_URL = http://www.non-gnu.org/gap/cynthiune/
 DESCRIPTION = GNUstep music file player
 define BLURB 
-Cynthiune is a free software and romantic music player for GNUstep and
-(unmentionable non-free oses), able to play a lot of different audio
+Cynthiune is a free-software and romantic music player for GNUstep (and
+unmentionable non-free o.s.es), able to play a lot of different audio
 formats. The author, Wolfgang Sourdeau, wrote it originally as a Christmas
 gift to a girl that he liked because she could not listen to music on
-her XXX with a free program.
+her XXX computer with a free program.
 endef
 
-# install note.  There are many dependencies to handle file formats.
-# partial list:
+# install note.  There are many dependencies to handle numerous file formats.
+# partial list of packages that might be needed:
 #      sudo apt-get install libid3-tools libid3tag0 libid3tag0-dev
 #  modplug-tools  libmodplug-dev  libmodplug1
 #  audiofile-tools libaudiofile-dev  libaudiofile1
-#   libavifile-0.7-bin libavifile-0.7-common  libavifile-0.7-dev  
libavifile-0.7c2
-#    musepack-tools etc
+#   libavifile-0.7-bin libavifile-0.7-common  libavifile-0.7-dev
+#   libavifile-0.7c2     musepack-tools  and others
 
 
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