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01/01: website: packaging-tutorial: Fix typos.
From: |
Pierre Neidhardt |
Subject: |
01/01: website: packaging-tutorial: Fix typos. |
Date: |
Mon, 19 Nov 2018 08:57:01 -0500 (EST) |
ambrevar pushed a commit to branch master
in repository guix-artwork.
commit 509a276c2e07b923ee1de53450fa57f7917ed09c
Author: Pierre Neidhardt <address@hidden>
Date: Mon Nov 19 14:56:38 2018 +0100
website: packaging-tutorial: Fix typos.
* website/posts/packaging-tutorial.md: Fix typos.
---
website/posts/packaging-tutorial.md | 13 +++++++------
1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/website/posts/packaging-tutorial.md
b/website/posts/packaging-tutorial.md
index bf220d6..13ea60c 100644
--- a/website/posts/packaging-tutorial.md
+++ b/website/posts/packaging-tutorial.md
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ gpg: There is no indication that the signature
belongs to the owner.
Primary key fingerprint: 8ED3 96E3 7E38 D471 A005 30D3 A955 3245 FDE9 B739
```
-Now you can happily run
+You can then happily run
```sh
$ guix package --install-from-file=my-hello.scm
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ is, the line reserved for user input. See [the Guile
manual](https://www.gnu.or
the REPL.
- Scheme syntax boils down to a tree of expressions (or *s-expression* in
Lisp
- lingo). An expression can be a literal such numbers and strings, or a
+ lingo). An expression can be a literal such as numbers and strings, or a
compound which is a parenthesized list of compounds and literals. `#t` and
`#f` stand for the booleans "true" and "false", respectively.
@@ -379,8 +379,9 @@ But first, let's look at other possibilities.
### Local file
-This is what we previously did with `my-hello`. Now that we know more Scheme,
-let's explain the leading chunks. As stated in `guix package --help`:
+This is what we previously did with `my-hello`. With the Scheme basics we've
+covered, we are now able to explain the leading chunks. As stated in `guix
+package --help`:
```sh
-f, --install-from-file=FILE
@@ -1076,12 +1077,12 @@ See the [Guix
homepage](https://www.gnu.org/software/guix/contact/) for informat
# Conclusion
-This tutorial was an showcase of the sophisticated package management that Guix
+This tutorial was a showcase of the sophisticated package management that Guix
boasts. At this point we have mostly restricted this introduction to the
`gnu-build-system` which is a core abstraction layer on which more advanced
abstractions are based.
-Now where do we go from here? Next we ought to dissect the innards of the
build
+Where do we go from here? Next we ought to dissect the innards of the build
system by removing all abstractions, using the `trivial-build-system`: this
should give us a thorough understanding of the process before investigating
some
more advanced packaging techniques and edge cases.