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01/06: doc: Fix typos.


From: guix-commits
Subject: 01/06: doc: Fix typos.
Date: Sun, 9 Jun 2019 10:19:12 -0400 (EDT)

nckx pushed a commit to branch master
in repository guix.

commit 940511257c83538f8cd7631292d173c8ce927152
Author: Tobias Geerinckx-Rice <address@hidden>
Date:   Sun Jun 9 03:29:59 2019 +0200

    doc: Fix typos.
    
    * doc/guix.texi (Version Control Services): Fix typos & edit surrounding
    text.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index bd0f3e8..a9cd66c 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -22723,10 +22723,10 @@ Extra options will be passed to @code{git daemon}, 
please run
 @end deftp
 
 The @code{git://} protocol lacks authentication.  When you pull from a
-repository fetched via @code{git://}, you don't know that the data you
-receive was modified is really coming from the specified host, and you
-have your connection is subject to eavesdropping.  It's better to use an
-authenticated and encrypted transport, such as @code{https}.  Although Git 
allows you
+repository fetched via @code{git://}, you don't know whether the data you
+receive was modified or is even coming from the specified host, and your
+connection is subject to eavesdropping.  It's better to use an authenticated
+and encrypted transport, such as @code{https}.  Although Git allows you
 to serve repositories using unsophisticated file-based web servers,
 there is a faster protocol implemented by the @code{git-http-backend}
 program.  This program is the back-end of a proper Git web service.  It



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