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Re: Talk for the GHM

From: Ludovic Courtès
Subject: Re: Talk for the GHM
Date: Fri, 19 Jul 2013 14:24:17 +0200
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Andreas Enge <address@hidden> skribis:

> Sounds good to me, with the first paragraph maybe a bit heavy on buzzwords.

Heh.  :-)

I wanted it to be high-level and concise, and ended up reusing that ELS
intro.  I think I’ll go with this one, because holiday time has come.  ;-)

> Am Mittwoch, 17. Juli 2013 schrieb Ludovic Courtès:
>>   This talk will reflect on a year of development, showing how far we’ve
>>   got toward this mission,
> "come" instead of "got", I think; I would also continue with infinitives: 
> "show" instead of "showing".


>>   and showing off with a demo.
> "give" instead of "show off with", or "finish with"?

I really meant that we’ll be showing off.  :-)

Thanks for your input,

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