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Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter.


From: Ricardo Wurmus
Subject: Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter.
Date: Sun, 20 Sep 2015 17:49:44 +0200

On IRC I was told that the description wasn’t quite as neutral as it
should have been, so here’s another attempt:

       "M.A.R.S. is a 2D space shooter with pretty visual effects and
attractive physics.  Players can battle each other or computer controlled
enemies in different game modes such as space ball, death match, team death
match, cannon keep, and grave-itation pit."

* “pretty visual effects” rather than “awesome visual effects”.
* “attractive physics” — I could not think of a more appropriate term; it
  surely is not “realistic”.
* “exciting game modes” has become “different game modes such as ...”

What do you think?

~~ Ricardo




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