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Re: [PATCH] doc: Fix spelling.

From: Maxim Cournoyer
Subject: Re: [PATCH] doc: Fix spelling.
Date: Thu, 27 Apr 2017 08:45:31 -0700
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Hi Ricardo!

On April 27, 2017 8:28:25 AM PDT, Ricardo Wurmus <address@hidden> wrote:
>* doc/cuirass.texi (Introduction): Fix typo and use American English
> doc/cuirass.texi | 4 ++--
> 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>diff --git a/doc/cuirass.texi b/doc/cuirass.texi
>index e5f29a6..ff5f7b0 100644
>--- a/doc/cuirass.texi
>+++ b/doc/cuirass.texi
>@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Reference sections:
> @dfn{Cuirass} is a general-purpose build automation server that checks
> out source files from @acronym{VCS, Version Control System}
> repositories, executes a @dfn{build job}, and notifies the results of
>-that job.  A build job consists of a combinaison of tasks such as
>+that job.  A build job consists of a combination of tasks such as
> compiling source code to binary code and running automated tests.
> Notification is achieved by using a database that stores the build
>results associated with an HTTP server that provides a convenient way
>@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ basis of the @dfn{Continuous integration} practice.
>@command{cuirass} acts as a daemon polling @acronym{VCS, version
> system} repositories for changes, and evaluating a derivation when
> something has changed (@pxref{Derivations, Derivations,, guix, Guix}).
>-As a final step the derivation is realised and the result of that
>+As a final step the derivation is realized and the result of that

Earlier we used *results* (plural). I think both are OK but we should harmonize.

> allows you to know if the job succeed or not.


> What is actually done by @command{cuirass} is specified in a @dfn{job

The rest LGTM.

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