[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/SemFen article.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/05/02 01:12:47

Modified files:
        SemFen         : article.rst 

Log message:
        comment

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/SemFen/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.22&tr2=1.23&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/SemFen/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/SemFen/article.rst:1.22 manuscripts/SemFen/article.rst:1.23
--- manuscripts/SemFen/article.rst:1.22 Fri May  2 01:11:15 2003
+++ manuscripts/SemFen/article.rst      Fri May  2 01:12:47 2003
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 ==========================================================================
 
 
-.. :Stamp: $Id: article.rst,v 1.22 2003/05/02 05:11:15 tjl Exp $
+.. :Stamp: $Id: article.rst,v 1.23 2003/05/02 05:12:47 tjl Exp $
 
 .. Authors: Benja Fallenstein, Tuukka Hastrup, Tuomas J. Lukka
 
@@ -46,10 +46,22 @@
 Introduction
 ============
 
-[tjl] XXX: the idea that the global graph can be constructed
-using semantic interoperability is not apparent here! *NEEDS*
-to be. Otherwise, referee: "Yes, great, but what does it have
-to do with SemWeb?"
+..  
+
+    [tjl] XXX: the idea that the global graph can be constructed
+    using semantic interoperability is not apparent here! *NEEDS*
+    to be. Otherwise, referee: "Yes, great, but what does it have
+    to do with SemWeb?"
+
+    The intro should say
+       1) what is this
+       2) why present it at semweb conference
+
+    It feels much too long now, and doesn't cover point 2) at all.
+
+    Also, benja was saying we want to talk more generally
+    about how to connect the apps - then should
+    have less mention of fenfire.
 
 Assume that a user needs to coordinate the activities of her
 workgroup. She has at her disposal applications for email,