[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/05/30 07:23:01

Modified files:
        UMLLink        : short-paper.rst 

Log message:
        Another one of Jvk's comments - also shorten a bit

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst.diff?tr1=1.50&tr2=1.51&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst
diff -u manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst:1.50 
manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst:1.51
--- manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst:1.50    Fri May 30 07:21:42 2003
+++ manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst Fri May 30 07:23:01 2003
@@ -291,12 +291,12 @@
 .. think, this should be much clearer :) But how to say everything shortly...
 
 Navidoc, our implementation, is a light-weight tool built on top of
-several existing Free Software tools. Its main function is to 
+existing Free Software tools. Its main function is to 
 compile
 the design documentation and UML diagrams embedded within it
 and to insert copies of the UML diagrams into the embedded documentation
 pages. 
-Navidoc uses several free utilies to convert each
+Navidoc converts each
 UML diagram into a set of imagemaps --- one
 for each target document since the current document is highlighted
 in the images. The diagrams allow easy traversal