[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm short-paper.rst style.tex

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/05/30 07:45:56

Modified files:
        storm          : short-paper.rst style.tex 

Log message:
        Abstract twids

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst.diff?tr1=1.17&tr2=1.18&r1=text&r2=text
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/style.tex.diff?tr1=1.10&tr2=1.11&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst
diff -u manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.17 
manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.18
--- manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.17      Fri May 30 07:23:59 2003
+++ manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst   Fri May 30 07:45:56 2003
@@ -6,19 +6,19 @@
 
     \begin{abstract}
     Linking personal documents like we link Web pages is inconvenient
-    enough that users rarely ever do it. A major reason is that
+    enough that users rarely if ever do it. A major reason is that
     links break when documents are moved around or sent by mail.
        
     We propose Storm, a storage system for use both on the
     desktop and the public network. Storm assigns each document
-    a permanent URI when it is created. Using peer-to-peer
+    a permanent unique URI when it is created. Using peer-to-peer
     technology, we can locate documents even though our URIs
     do not include location information.
     Thus, links continue to work unchanged when documents are emailed
     or published on the network.
 
     We have extended KDE and Netscape Communicator 4 to understand
-    our experimental URIs. Most other systems can use Storm 
+    Storm URIs. Other systems are able to use Storm 
     through an HTTP gateway.
     \end{abstract}
 
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
 In Freenet [freenet-ieee]_, an anonymous peer-to-peer
 publication system, *cryptographic hashes* [bakhtiari95cryptographic]_
 are used to identify versions of documents. Hashes
-are short, e.g. 20 bytes, yet it is extremely unlikely
+are short, e.g. 20 bytes, yet it is practically impossible
 that two different documents will ever have the same hash,
 making them ideal identifiers on the Web.
 
Index: manuscripts/storm/style.tex
diff -u manuscripts/storm/style.tex:1.10 manuscripts/storm/style.tex:1.11
--- manuscripts/storm/style.tex:1.10    Fri May 30 07:24:00 2003
+++ manuscripts/storm/style.tex Fri May 30 07:45:56 2003
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
        \affaddr{Dept. of Mathematical Information Technology}\\
        \affaddr{University of Jyväskylä, Finland}\\
        \affaddr{PO. Box 35 (Agora), FIN-40014 Jyväskylä}\\
-       address@hidden, address@hidden, address@hidden
+       address@hidden, address@hidden, address@hidden
 \alignauthor Toni Alatalo\\
        \affaddr{Department of Information Processing Sciences}\\
        \affaddr{University of Oulu, Finland}\\