Re: website almiracle.codes

[Laurent Lyaudet]

Le jeu. 29 sept. 2022 à 18:44,
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> Date: Thu, 29 Sep 2022 10:16:09 -0400
> From: Miriam Bastian <miriam@fsf.org>
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> Cc: alimiracle@riseup.net
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> hi
> Some of you don't remember me.
> And some don't know me.
> Been gone a long time.
> But still exists in the World of Freedom
> Like a Unix demon Works quietly in the background
> I've redesigned my personal website
> As some of you know I'm blind
> I do not know the explanation for the colors
> I consider colors as numbers and I have strange shapes for them in my
> imagination
> So I tried to make the website simple
> Please give me your feedback and suggestions to improve the website
> website:
> https://alimiracle.codes
> have fun and be free
> alimiracle

Hello Ali,

Your website is nice to look at :).
I have no idea how it is to design a website whilst being blind,
but you did a good job.
I have spotted a few typos :

On the home : https://alimiracle.codes/
- "System Adminstrator" is missing a "i", it should be "System Administrator".
Usually when I report typos for articles, books, translations,
I use a more compact writing like :
"System Adminstrator" -> "System Administrator".
For a people that sees well, it has both the information of the wrong
text and the correct text at the same time, because his brain can do a
diff of both texts (for simple texts).
But I assume, you must have a sequential reading of all this, since
you are blind.
What I propose you is to help you have both the wrong text and the
correct text by using the following characters that you do not use in
your texts : [, |, and ].
Current text to be modified is between [ and |, and it should be
replaced by the text between | and ]. After that, I copy "text before"
-> "text after" as usual so that you can use search/replace features.
But I just remembered that my email lines will be autowrapped.
So I will use 3 lines for each typo.
Thus, I will write this for the previous typo :
- "System Admin[|i]strator"
: "System Adminstrator"
-> "System Administrator".
Each line starts with -, : or ->.

Let's move on to the other typos on this page :
- "I am Ali Abdul Ghani[|.]"
: "I am Ali Abdul Ghani"
-> "I am Ali Abdul Ghani."
- "My education is bachelor of English literature[ |],"
: "My education is bachelor of English literature ,"
-> "My education is bachelor of English literature,"
- "[A|a]s the laws in Iraq"
: "As the laws in Iraq"
-> "as the laws in Iraq"

Second web page :
https://alimiracle.codes/Skills
I spotted only one typo but it is there 5 times.
The 5 sentences are missing a dot at the end.

Third web page :
https://alimiracle.codes/Projects
The main problem is word wrapping that occurs at any place.
I played with the css classes in Firefox, and, from my experiments,
you can safely remove the css class "break-all" on the paragraphs.
For example, the cards 1, 3, 4, 5 for :
- AMH ALGORITHMS,
- URUK PACKAGE MANAGERS SIMULATOR
- IRC LOG RECORDER
- Shahad
looks much nicer without the break-all class
on the second paragraph of each card.
I do not know if your screen reader tells you where word wrapping occurs.
If not, then please remove all break-all classes on this page and I'll
tell you how it looks
(I saved this page on my computer and edited it, but it doesn't show
when I open it after.
It does not seem to be pure static content, and I cannot look further.)

By the way, "Shahad" is the only card title that is not all uppercase,
if you want to uppercase it as the others.

- "This program can simulate a famous package managers [C|c]ommands."
: "This program can simulate a famous package managers Commands."
-> "This program can simulate a famous package managers commands."

- "Telegram bot library in bash[|.]"
: "Telegram bot library in bash"
-> "Telegram bot library in bash."

- "[c|C]lara is [|a ]bot use[|d] to [B|b]ackup all your databases[
and|,] your websites and server configurations[|,] and send
[N|n]otifications to the admin when something happens in the
server[|.]"
: "clara is bot use to Backup all your databases and your websites and
server configurations and send Notifications to the admin when
something happens in the server"
-> "Clara is a bot used to backup all your databases, your websites
and server configurations, and send notifications to the admin when
something happens in the server."
Maybe it should be "on the server" instead of "in the server".
That's what I would write.

- "Tabannusi is a continuous build[ing|] system."
: "Tabannusi is a continuous building system."
-> "Tabannusi is a continuous build system."

- "[i|I]t watches git repository[,|;] if you make [|a ]new commit"
: "it watches git repository, if you make new commit"
-> "It watches git repository; if you make a new commit"

Sorry, I do not have time to continue for this page, because there are
many cards.
I will try to give you the rest of the typos for this page later, when
I have more time.

Fourth web page :
https://alimiracle.codes/Expirences
There is a typo in the URL :
- "https://alimiracle.codes/Exp[ir|eri]ences"
: "https://alimiracle.codes/Expirences"";
-> "https://alimiracle.codes/Experiences";

- "I work in this team as a [p|P]rogrammer and [s|S]ystem [a|A]dmin
[from|since] 2009[|.]"
: "I work in this team as a programmer and system admin from 2009"
-> "I work in this team as a Programmer and System Admin since 2009."
I am not a native English speaker, but I think it should be "since"
instead of "from".
I capitalized all your job titles since you did it on most of them.
But maybe it would be better to lowercase them all.
Hence part of this typo and the following typos should be done or not
according to your choice of uppercasing or lowercasing everywhere.

- "I was working as a[| ]Freelance [s|S]ystems [a|A]nalyst [F|f]rom
2015 [T|t]o 2017[|.]"
: "I was working as aFreelance systems analyst From 2015 To 2017"
-> "I was working as a Freelance Systems Analyst from 2015 to 2017."

- "I was working as a [t|T]echnical [c|C]onsultant [F[f]rom 2017
[T|t]o 2018[|.]"
: "I was working as a technical consultant From 2017 To 2018"
-> "I was working as a Technical Consultant from 2017 to 2018."

- "I was working as a [s|S]ystem Admin from 2018/2 to 2018/9[|.]"
: "I was working as a system Admin from 2018/2 to 2018/9"
-> "I was working as a System Admin from 2018/2 to 2018/9."

- "I work as [|a ]DevOps Engineer [From|since] 2018/9[|.]"
: "I work as DevOps Engineer From 2018/9"
-> "I work as a DevOps Engineer since 2018/9."

That's all I spotted apart from your Projects page where I need more time.
I hope you will find it useful.
If some native English speaker reads this email and can tell us if
something is wrong for some of my remarks, it would be nice.

Have a nice day, best regards,
    Laurent Lyaudet