proof-reading

[Han-Wen Nienhuys]

address@hidden writes:
> I just went through sections 1 through 1.3 and offer these corrections. 
> If there is a better way for me to do this please tell me.

Thanks!

I've applied them. The format that I prefer is "diff -u", ie. edit the file,
and do

     diff -u old-file new-file 

If you do it like this, I can put the fixes in directly.

> [NB Section titles work like titles.  In English all words are
> capitalized except for "unimportant" words like "the," "a," "an," "and,"
> "this" unless they are the first word, of course. ]
> 

I know about the convention, but I think is American and not English.
However, I also think that it is a poor style, which should go away.

I remember that the original reason for having mixed caps was
something very mundane with the inventory of lead-type in larger font
sizes. In the digital age, it is no longer necessary.

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