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A few corrections and suggestions to the manual


From: Pedro Kroger
Subject: A few corrections and suggestions to the manual
Date: Mon, 26 Apr 2004 17:17:33 -0300
User-agent: Mutt/1.5.5.1+cvs20040105i

Hi,

I'm reading again the manual and it has really improved! Congrats!
This is a list of small corrections and suggestions:


introduction.itely cvs 1.97
=============================

l. 494:
  "Score context" has no definition. would be nice to have, since
  "Staff Context" and "Voice Context" have

l. 794:
  define "tips and tricks document"

tutorial.itely cvs 1.206
==========================

l. 206:
  I would or add "violin" to the list of clefs or change the example
  at line 479 to use "treble"

l. 1311:
  shows a nice feature with a not very nice example :-(
  I'd change the bass part to avoid the colliding notes, for example:

<<
  \new Staff <<
    { a4 g2 f4~ f4 } \\
    { s4 g4 f2 f4 }
  >>
  \new Staff <<
    \clef bass
    { f,4 d e2 ~ e4} \\
    { <c, g>1 ~ <c g>4 } 
  >>
>>

l. 1601:
  it should print the options in brackets
  (i.e. \begin[quote,staffsize=26,verbatim]{lilypond})

l. 1608:
  it should print:  
  \lilypondfile[quote,noindent]{screech-boink.ly}

notation.itely cvs 1.37
========================

l. 87:
  I don't know if it's me but I found " The pitch @code{c} is an
  octave below middle C and the letters span the octave above that C"
  not clear.

l. 209:
  would be nice to have the lily code printed

l. 231:
  maybe would be a good idea to say the rest will be placed at note's
  place (it's obvious, but I took a few seconds to figure it out)

l. 262:
  explains what happens in this example

l. 301:
  maybe replace "For notes longer than a whole you must use the
  variables \longa and \breve" for "For notes longer than a whole you
  must use variables"

l. 611:
  link to transpose section?

l. 704:
  show the lily code?

l. 820:
  I'd replace tonality for scale in "The key signature indicates the
  scale"

l. 1217:
  (missing "in" and period)
  has:
    called "layers" other notation
  should be:
    called "layers" in other notation.

l. 2078:
  has: "iIn" should be: "In"

l. 2451:
  would be nice to have an example of "unfold"





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