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Re: draft release announcement

From: Cameron Horsburgh
Subject: Re: draft release announcement
Date: Wed, 1 Nov 2006 08:25:25 +1100
User-agent: Mutt/1.5.13 (2006-08-11)

On Tue, Oct 31, 2006 at 01:31:26AM +0100, Han-Wen Nienhuys wrote:
> Hi guys,
> a draft of the 2.10 release announcement is at
> please comment.
> thanks,

A couple of things:

Is there going to be a 2.10.0? Even if there is, it's the new series that is 
making the news, so I would suggest leaving the version number at 2.10.

`got annoyed' is a little unprofessional. Perhaps `were disappointed' or 
`became disillusioned'.

`computer print-out' should be `computer print-outs' or even `computer 
generated print outs.'

`reading' should be `to read'

Of course, these are just my opinions! When does the announcement look likely?


Cameron Horsburgh


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