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Re: Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food
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Graham Percival |
Subject: |
Re: Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food |
Date: |
Thu, 5 Feb 2009 23:08:15 +0800 |
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On Wed, Feb 04, 2009 at 07:03:19PM +0100, Maximilian Albert wrote:
> Just a few random nitpicks so far (I haven't read the whole thing, though):
Ok. Chapter 7 is mostly Carl's domain, but I'll fix most of these
issues.
> - The last word in 7.3 must read "ineffective" instead of "inefective".
> - In the third item in 7.4.11 it should be "E.g." instead of "Eg"
> after the first sentence.
Done, although as a general rule I wouldn't fuss about things like
E.g. vs. Eg in the CG. (rhyme not intentional)
> - In the fourth item in 7.4.11, is the call to message() really
> correct? Shouldn't 'Calculating line breaks...' also be surrounded by
> quotation marks?
Done, although I'm wondering about this now. For example,
address@hidden:~/svn/lilypond/lily$ grep Calculating *
minimal-page-breaking.cc: message (_ ("Calculating line
breaks..."));
minimal-page-breaking.cc: message (_ ("Calculating page
breaks..."));
page-turn-page-breaking.cc: message (_f ("Calculating page and
line breaks (%d possible page breaks)...",
paper-score.cc: message (_ ("Calculating line breaks...") + " ");
Anybody know what the difference is between
message(_
and
message(_f
?
> - In the second item on p. 25 in 7.4.11 two closing parentheses are
> missing after "warning (out of tune:"
They're there, but on the next line. Perhaps there's a bad page
break?
Oh, all those @verbatims should have the initial whitespace
removed. I'll get around to that sometime; it's not a priority.
> - Just as a thought, since you mention grep in section 7.3.2 you might
> just as well add a comment that -i can be helpful if you're unsure
> about the capitalization of function names.
ok.
> And a bit less nitpicky: In 7.5.4 it should be mentioned where
> .gdbinit files need to be placed in order to make them work.
Dunno about this. I'll let Carl answer/fix it.
Cheers,
- Graham
- Re: [frogs] Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food, (continued)
- Re: [frogs] Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food, Anthony W. Youngman, 2009/02/07
- Re: [frogs] Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food, Graham Breed, 2009/02/07
- Re: [frogs] Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food, Graham Percival, 2009/02/07
- Re: [frogs] Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food, Trevor Daniels, 2009/02/07
- Re: [frogs] Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food, Anthony W. Youngman, 2009/02/07
- Re: [frogs] Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food, Anthony W. Youngman, 2009/02/07
- Re: [frogs] Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food, Hans Aberg, 2009/02/07
- Re: [frogs] Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food, Anthony W. Youngman, 2009/02/07
Re: [frogs] Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food, Hans Aberg, 2009/02/04
Re: Discourse on the Consumption of Dog Food, Maximilian Albert, 2009/02/04
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