RE: [Patch] Including mandolin fretboard diagrams

[James Lowe]

Hello

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)From: address@hidden
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)Behalf Of Marc Hohl
)Sent: 07 April 2011 11:07
)To: Lily-Devel List; Carl D. Sorensen
)Subject: [Patch] Including mandolin fretboard diagrams
)
)Hello all,
)
)according to
)
)http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/lilypond-user/2011-03/msg00260.html
)
)I added mandolin fretboards and hopefully included the stuff correctly in
)the documentation.
)

Marc, I compiled it and what you have done from a Doc point of view is fine now 
that I can see it in context.

I see actually that a couple of these paragraphs in general could do with a bit 
of a tidy up both syntactically and grammatically; there is a lot of (IMO) 
unnecessary repetition that could be edited down to be less wordy and more 
instructive-y ;)

I'll take another look at the Doc part only when the patch is approved and 
pushed, so from that point of view your edits for the doc part is:


LGTM!

James