Re: Improve wording for an NR paragraph (issue 259710043 by address@hidden)

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https://codereview.appspot.com/259710043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely
File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/259710043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode3490
Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:3490: Or dynamics that @q{stick
out} of a system can be moved closer to the staff:
On 2015/09/03 01:28:06, Dan Eble wrote:
> Starting a sentence with "or" seems too informal.  How about, "Another
example
> is..."?  Perhaps we could keep just one good example and throw away
the other
> one; or if they are both equally important, maybe they deserve to be
separate
> items.

Yes I'd concur with Dab. I'd simply remove the word 'Or', use a
semi-colon instead of a full stop and continue with the sentence as it
is. We  typically use a semi colon at the end of 'sentences' that are
about to be illustrated by an @lilypond example (i.e. instead of the
colon you've put here).

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