Doc: CG minor corrections to 2.1 LilyDev (issue 277450043 by address@hidden)

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Doc: CG minor corrections to 2.1 LilyDev

Minor corrections to CG 2.1

Please review this at https://codereview.appspot.com/277450043/

Affected files (+4, -4 lines):
  M Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi


Index: Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
diff --git a/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi  
b/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
index  
b515eff1de82a67b950e473a83fc238a7c9afbca..9d8018692ee6a01a67666639ef404aac135e6e99  
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--- a/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
+++ b/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ LilyPond, the documentation and the website (also see
 @warning{LilyDev does not include the software for the Grand Unified
 Builder -- also see @ref{Grand Unified Builder (GUB)}.}

-While compiling LilyPond on MacOs and Windows is possible, both
+While compiling LilyPond on Mac OS and Windows is possible, both
 environments are complex to set up.  LilyDev can be easily installed
 and run inside a @q{virtual machine} on either of these operating
 systems relatively easily using readily available virtualization
@@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ The LilyDev disk image can also be written to a USB  
device or @q{burnt}
 to a DVD -- it is approximately 900 MB in size -- and installed just
 like any standard GNU/Linux distribution.

-The current image is based on a 32bit version of Debian 8 (@q{Jessie})
-and the Disk image was generated using Debian
+The current image is based on a 32-bit version of Debian 8 (@q{Jessie})
+and the disk image was generated using Debian
 @uref{http://live.debian.net/, live-build 4}.

 @noindent
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ directory and the entire source code will start to be  
downloaded into
 it.

 @warning{Be patient! There is no progress bar in the lily-git UI but the
-complete source is around address@hidden
+complete source is around address@hidden

 @noindent
 When the source code has been downloaded, the @qq{command output} window