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Re: Two small amendments to Doc/web/community.itexi (issue 319880043 by
Re: Two small amendments to Doc/web/community.itexi (issue 319880043 by address@hidden)
Fri, 23 Dec 2016 00:08:52 +0100
On 22.12.2016 23:21, address@hidden wrote:
File Documentation/web/community.itexi (right):
Documentation/web/community.itexi:434: every bug can be demonstrated in
four lines of code or less!}
Hmm, I think "four notes" is shorter (and easier to understand) than
"four lines of codes".
All right, change reverted.
Documentation/web/community.itexi:498: any activity on the bug occurs.
For that, just click the envelope
I would replace ". For that, just click" with "by clicking". So that
area would be:
... any activity on the bug occurs, by clicking the envelope symbol...
I didn’t want to separate the ‘by clicking’ so much from the ‘subscribe’
to which it refers,
so I chose yet another wording I hope you’ll agree to.