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Re: Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 b
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nine . fierce . ballads |
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Re: Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 by address@hidden) |
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Tue, 28 Jan 2020 15:57:59 -0800 |
Good work. Needs some revision.
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
File Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi (right):
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode94
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:94: The zip archive you
downloaded containes the raw disk image and
containes -> contains
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode152
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:152: @q{Extended features:
Enable EFI}. Otherwise you won't be
... Enable EFI}; otherwise, ...
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode159
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:159: interaction with your
mouse pointer on both the host and guest and let
... guest, and let ...
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode188
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:188: You can change the
password of the @q{dev} user similarly, just call
... similarly; just call ...
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode204
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:204: At first you will be
prompted for the model of your keyboard.
At first, ...
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode205
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:205: Press Enter to show
further models. In most cases it will be
In most cases, ...
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode206
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:206: sufficient to choose
number 71 (Generic, 105 keys). After that
After that, ...
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode207
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:207: choose your keyboard
layout. Now you can customize the function of
Now, ...
Do you detect a pattern here? :)
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode208
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:208: your AltGr key.
Normally you will use the default layout settings,
Normally, ...
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode209
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:209: so take number 1. The
same holds for the question whether you want
... the question of whether ...
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode211
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:211: At last you will be
asked if you want to configure
At last, ...
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode213
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:213: Presumably you will not
need this, so you can safely type @q{no}.
Presumably, ...
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode216
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:216: To setup your system
language(charset, localized messages etc.),
set up
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/547520043/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode228
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:228: Finally you should run
a setup script. If you're on the command line
Finally, ...
https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/
- Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 by address@hidden), michael . kaeppler, 2020/01/28
- Re: Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 by address@hidden),
nine . fierce . ballads <=
- Re: Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 by address@hidden), lemzwerg, 2020/01/29
- Re: Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 by address@hidden), fedelogy, 2020/01/29
- Re: Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 by address@hidden), michael . kaeppler, 2020/01/30
- Re: Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 by address@hidden), michael . kaeppler, 2020/01/30
- Re: Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 by address@hidden), lemzwerg, 2020/01/30
- Re: Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 by address@hidden), michael . kaeppler, 2020/01/30
- Re: Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 by address@hidden), michael . kaeppler, 2020/01/30