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Re: help to rewrite in correct english
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Pål Brattberg |
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Re: help to rewrite in correct english |
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Thu, 21 Dec 2000 09:41:33 +0100 |
Hi.
I just read the page you wrote on http://www.gnu.org/education/, and it
looked nice except for one passage;
"Here we have collected some information about the relationship between the
GNU project with education..."
This could be better frased as this;
"Here is some information we have collected about the relationship between
the GNU project and education..."
Otherwise it was pretty good! :)
/ pal